Saturday, April 9, 2011
Irk and Smirk
The scattering scenes flashed,
Of all the dreams that were crashed,
Pictured all the moments that were snatched.
Brusque was the butchering,
The pieces failed to be put together even after lot of panicking.
The catastrophic past still remains the reason,
For eyes becoming moist, heart and soul crying in unison.
The trauma still speaks out aloud,
With some impromptu occurrences still rendering me speechless,
When I'm left with something that remains unseen to the crowd.
The memories mar my mind, with convulsions making me senseless.
The betrayal had such an impact on the mind,
Insecurity and fear were available in every kind.
Rebuilding the world with a bond and a lifeline called hope,
Triumphal phoenix rose, trying to cope.
The first flush of exultation was actually a paradox,
To rise and live again was taught by a coax.
Attachment and emotions were put on a trial,
Who knew that the euphoria was to last only for a while.
The sheer stab on trust and it was all over.
The eyes again became moist which once used to rover.
Thinking and wondering, I began to hum and haw,
Because present painted the same fresco what in past I saw.
Leave behind the clutches and live with no strings attached,
You own no one, put it in your mind scratched!
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its awesum..keep up the good work...u r amazing wid words aman a rare talent ,never let it go waste...keep writing..
ReplyDeleteWOOH! U-ARE-GOOD!
ReplyDeleteTO PUT YOUR THOUHTS AND FELINGS INTO SUCH FORM AND THAT TOO, SO SPONTANEOUSLY, AND I WOULD SAY 'INVOLUNTARILY' IN YOUR CASE.
ON ONE SIDE, I CAN SEE THE NEXT BIG THING COMING UP(IE, IF YOU PUT AN EFFORT TO IT AND RECOGNISE WHAT GIFT YOU HAVE)
ON THE OTHER, I CAN'T HELP BUT FEEL BAD ABOUT HOW HEARTBROKEN YOU MUST BE RIGHT NOW.
WISHING YOU GET ALL THE STRENGTH (AND AN ENOUGH VOCAB OF GOOD ABUSES) TO OVERCOME THIS.
truly reflects a broken heart,a broken soul! :D
ReplyDeleteBut mind it anna raaskalaa!! This is not the end of world(2012???).
You can be at par with the most charismatic 'you'.
'' For men may come and men may go,but I (here 'you') go on forever'
keep drinking,keep smoking and keep giggling....lol !
Chako khedo !
Thank you all! Guess I used too heavy words that yielded heavier comments!!
ReplyDeletePlus these thoughts were on my mind since long. They recently found words as I found time! :D
Nothing like broken heart: A public statement!! ;)
Anyways, glad that the new amateur thing turned out to be good.
Leave behind the blue part and cheers to the new venture!!! :)
Truly great work...... Words have been appropriately beaded in.....I have witnessed you fiddling with words for this poem past three- four months and finally the end product has left me..................... spellbound. Never had the idea that you have poetic talent too:) keep writing.... may be I'll see my long desire of gathering words into a poem come true through you.
ReplyDeleteThank you Massi. Yes, prolonged effort finally bore nice results. I also liked fiddling with words 'this' way. Will soon come up with more compositions.
ReplyDeleteanother great one...
ReplyDeleteThanks!! :)
ReplyDeletebeautiful, just beautiful..
ReplyDeleteThank you. :)
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